Saturday, August 11, 2007

Black Mist

The previous posts, they're straight out f my diary....
This one is actually dated today...
I am in a total messed up state of mind.. I dont know what's wrong...
M's blog inspired me to start one of my own.. But I dont have an actual reason of my own

M not here to tell others how i feel, or how bad my writing skills are..
I knw m nt gud at expression...
I dnt knw why i am here...

Anyway, here the one for today goes...


A dead corpse

Marvelous

Squashed

Bloodied

Engraved on Earth

Beautiful

The Black Mist

The Mist Monsters


The trees

They’ve turned purple

The apples are blue

So are the lips

Seductive

Seducing

The Black Mist

The Mist Monsters


I love you

Are you going to kill me too?

It’s the dusk

The light is fading

White

The Black Mist

The Mist Monsters


They’re here.

5 comments:

prateeksha said...

Shut your eyes, run away to farthest corner of the world or switch off your cellphone, your angst is screaming out of your words.

I assume writing this piece would have helped you in easing out and letting go of things. IF it hasn't, try being a little more vocal about it. Hide the names behind fiction, don't publish it if you don't wish to.

Come clean about whatever's gnawing at your guts. You'd feel better than ever.

chillipepperster said...

i'm wondering

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Unknown said...

I have read the compositions several times. All of them are good and it’s a better way to just eject everything out your mind. Actually I was shocked when I read all of them..they are written in such a nice way..though it shows your anger , your frustration, dullness, displeasure etc..but somehow it shows that your soul is true and pure… hope one day come when you don’t have to write anything like this..but yeah it is an impeccable piece of writing…always stay happy.!!

Anonymous said...

each one is more beautiful than the other...